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• Being Harry Potter XCIV

  (#) dennisud 2009-05-16

  I am having a great time reading this story, the byplay and verbal exchanges are well done and I am looking forward to getting more updates for this one!
  
  dennisud

  Author's response

  Thanks! That's actually a part that's a bit difficult to do - I left early teenager-hood behind a long, long time ago (or, at least, it sure FEELS that way), so I'm never too sure.

• Being Harry Potter XCIV

  (#) Nautilus 2009-05-17

  i do like the byplay between characters... hermione, honestly does seems for once to be a 14/15 year old young lady.. nice work... lookign forward to more... nice insight and ideas for the properties and attributes of woods.

  Author's response

  I mentioned this in response to a different review, but I thank you as well: the byplay between the characters is the hardest part for me, since I've not been a teenager for a long while. Hermione, of course, is the more difficult of the two, since I've never been female (which Harry has, much to his mortification!)
  
  The properties and attributes of the various woods, well, I can't really stake claim to that. I'm using mythology for those ideas, mostly. But hey, if I can tie them into the story, more fun for me! :-)

• Being Harry Potter XCIV

  (#) QundraDraconium 2009-05-22

  the formatting for the last two chapters threw me a bit. According to ficwad they are both the same chapter and you can only access one through the table of contents.
  
  As for the story, I like it a lot. Its the standard quantum leap type style that I've seen before, but your writing style and your plotting are both well done and intriguing. I look forward to future chapters.

  Author's response

  Yes, I filed a question with the Ficwad admins back when it first happened, but nothing has changed as of yet. Once it does, I'll post the remaining chapters.
  
  For those interested in the rest of the story, it can be found on TtH at:
  http://www.tthfanfic.org/Story-18105/Keldin+Being+Harry+Potter+XCIV+94.htm
  
  OR at fanfiction.net at:
  
  http://www.fanfiction.net/s/5084735/1/

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