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.:Frerard one-shot:. Its my first so tell me what I've done wrong please?!?!

Category: My Chemical Romance - Rating: R - Genres: Drama,Romance - Characters: Frank Iero,Gerard Way - Warnings: [R] - Published: 2009/05/22 - Updated: 2009/06/10 - 1867 words - Complete

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  (#) xxMCRMYxx 2009-05-22 07:16:45 AM

  That was easily one of the best fan fictios I have ever read in all seriousness no jokes.
  t made me cry and smile and just It was just fantastic
  Well done, really, I honestly did love it
  I have to read some of your other stuff
  
  xx Tilde

  Author's response

  Aww.... thank you! Thats my first one shot.... my other one sucked though :)
  
  thank you soooo much for reading it! that simple task means alot to me! :)
  
  awww.... i didnt wanna make people cry... thats why i didnt kill anyone :)
  
  SPANK YOU! :):)
  
  xox E

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  (#) xxASUKAxx 2009-05-22 09:42:20 AM

  tears omg why must you make me cry lol
  
  tha was so cute and sweet....nasty gee slaps gees head at least they are back to normal haha :D
  
  
  wooo
  
  xoxo Lottie oxox

  Author's response

  You cried? lolz! i didnt intentionally make it sad.... shifty eyes
  
  Dont hurt Gee too much.... you might make him cry :(
  
  :) thanks for reading my shitty first one-shot!
  
  xox E

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  (#) MyChemicalSuicide 2009-05-22 07:56:48 PM

  It was definietly not shitty, you fool.
  
  That was amazing. It was like I could feel all of the emotion Frank and Gerard were feeling.
  
  It was great (:
  
  XO
  Emily

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  (#) gotnosoul 2009-05-23 05:26:18 AM

  tears
  
  That was amazing, E-Jay. It takes alot to bring tears to my eyes, and this one-shot almost brought a whole fucking waterfall, aha.
  
  Don't you ever stop writing.
  
  xo, Jamie.

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  (#) GayFace 2009-05-23 12:33:38 PM

  Bad Gee, he needs a firm talking to... :( < that's how firm it'll be!
  
  Well... Frank is amazing to forgive him. Am I sad because I talk about them as REAL people (I know they ARE but you know what I mean)

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  (#) kattychatty5 2009-06-05 08:24:13 PM

  Oh I just almost cried, its sad, but then its the caring that Gerard shows that just makes it all better. I love it.

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  (#) -NonExistent 2009-06-07 11:03:16 PM

  :D! I loved this one-shot so amazingly much.
  You are a great writer, I love your style.
  Gee and Frankie... D;!
  Absolutely gorgeous.
  I loved it.
  (: xx

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  (#) warwornlipstick 2009-06-08 01:17:31 PM

  This was not shit. Although there were some minor errors with spelling and whatnot, it was very good. I loved it :)

  Author's response

  yeah, im not good with spelling... really.
  
  thanks for reading my first one-shot!
  
  xox E

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  (#) XxMy_Sweet_RevengexX 2009-06-10 07:24:37 PM

  Awww, that was so sad at the beginning...but at least it ended on a good note. I loved it. :]
  
  [Alice]

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  (#) frerard_is_love 2009-06-10 11:06:21 PM

  It WAS good, i don't care what you think. Your opinion just doesn't matter. And that's that.
  And aww with the forgiving, and all the cuteness. And what i really loved, but no one seemed to mention, was the glass cabinet thing where the 'raping' wall used to be. I know its random and off the point, but that was like the best bit. It's so thoughtful, and cute and nice and just aww.
  
  XONannonz

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