- Hi there,
This chapter was amazing I could feel the fear as Mikey was explaining the story and when you get to what was happening I couldn't help but laugh because you built it up so well and Gee was ending up having sex with a ghost. Kinky sex at that!!
I love how he was totally in denial about the whole thing, then finally in a way accepted that's what Mikey saw.
Poor Willow, Gee always screaming his thoughts at her, no matter what they might be. But at least he's being apologetic and trying to be a little more careful.
Well it's off to the Paramour, I wonder what's going to happen there. At least Mikey will have Willow and better yet Alicia. Who I have to say is awesome. She's so understanding and sympathetic about the whole thing.
I can't wait for more!!
(#) catlover070904 2009-06-05I really like this story, but in the one chapter 1 thing sticks out, and if you did it on purpose, oops, sorry. Anyway you put some of the lyrics to 'Sleep' in:
"And I don't feel bad about it. So close you're eyes, kiss me goodbye and sleep."
Well if you didn't do it on purpose, well, they are wrong. He really sings:
'Cause I don't feel bad
So shut your eyes
Kiss me goodbye
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