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Bring me something I can hold onto

by frankiespankie 2 Reviews

read it and weep? lol no read it and find out really the chapter name just sounds cool gonna go with the flo and see whats turns out.

Category: The Used - Rating: PG - Genres: Crossover - Characters:  - Warnings: [!!!] - Published: 2009/06/01 - Updated: 2009/06/02 - 805 words


  • Heavy Water

    (#) IeroMyHero 2009-06-28 12:32:15 PM

    Okay, so this story, I just don't understand it. Like, I just can't understand a single sentence. I'm sorry I can't be clearer than that, I just have no clue what you're trying to get at.

    Author's response

    Did you not learn to read?
    I mean really it's not that hard to read. and i would appreciate if you would just stop pretty much calling me a dumb ass that is all peace broseph.

    Bye now:)

    p.s.: tigers like pepper not cinnimon

    could ya read that?
  • Heavy Water

    (#) IeroMyHero 2009-06-29 08:15:58 AM

    You ask me to fucking read your bullshit stories and then insult me when I point out the obvious fact that they SUCK? I'm sorry, I'm not being nice about this anymore, this story is terrible, there is no plot and you have no grasp of the english language. You try to write with eloquence, but you fail so badly that it just turns into senseless garbage. A fifth grade language arts student could write better than you.

    And really, are you going to insult my literacy? Me? At least I have the ability of using proper punctuation. That is the main reason why nobody reads your crap.

    Excuse me for trying to guide you so that you could at least attempt to improve. I'm never doing that again, don't worry. Now please continue to write shitty plotless stories that nobody reads.

    Thank you for your time,

    p.s. You spelled cinnamon wrong.

    Author's response

    yeah i know thats cool.
    I belive i said bye now?
    Ps i dont give a shit.


    Heavy water - 71 views
    Ch.2 bring me something - 43 views
    We are broken - 26 views
    Cut up angles - 7 views

    And on mibba the views are about double. Those views are more than enough for me and the people that contact me on MySpace love the stories and there is a plot. I just haven’t finished the fucking story yet.

    When we learn to be civil, ill talk to you then.

    Hey. Sorry my friend checked my reviews and story views for me. I just got my internet back up, im sorry she feels the need to be rude to someone either one of us know.
    I really am sorry.

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