Willow spends the day with her new friends.
(#) kelly-khaos 2009-06-02 10:30:28 PMAnother great chapter!
Gerard's still having mood swings. The things he was doing at lunch were so rude.I think he kinda deserved that condom comment from Willow, but I still feel bad for him.
Anyway, update soon!
Author's responseThanks for the review, Kelly. Yeah, Gerard is dealing with a lot of emotions, he's fighting his emotions.
(#) somethingorother 2009-06-02 11:11:56 PMAre you sure Gerard isn't really a girl and has PMS like 24/7? Geez, what is wrong with him. He is so rude.
I was almost hoping Gerard would be nice and give some money to Willow or secretly to Alicia for Willow and be nice...but then lunch happened. What a poo head.
OooOOoo pained look? Will he stop being an ass?
Author's responseHey thanks for the review. Glad you caught the "pained" look.
(#) canustakemyheart 2009-06-03 02:03:08 AMActually, I think your Gerard is in character for someone who had lived through the scenario of his back story. Especially the fact that he just goes and fucks random women and "it means nothing". That would be like taking out frustration or something I would imagine. Great comment from Willow though. They're both getting to know how to get to one another in multiple ways. I see him also openly being rude during that whole diner thing (and after the Mikey chat) possibly in an attempt to get her not to like him in that way but also I think he's in denial. He's started to get feelings for her but doesn't want to get hurt.
And of course you've set it up that Willow is actually the same type of character - hurt badly by love. And she's also started to get feelings for him and doesn't want to get hurt. Wait till he finds out she's a virgin ... doubtful he could resist that.
Author's responseWow you just nailed exactly what's going on with these characters. They both are having problems dealing with their feelings towards each other. The virgin thing....yeah well that will be addressed later, of course. Thanks for the review.
(#) lacerationgravityxxx 2009-06-03 02:42:30 AMhaha! i totally agree with canustakemyheart!
i loved this chapter! i love how you write! i love you!
was that taking it too far?
nope i don't thinks so!
Author's responseWell thanks, I love you too!!! Glad you are enjoying this story.
- interesting i like it i dunno i have mixed feeling with gerard in this one and the lil comment willow made at the end seem to hurt him alot and i think its cos of his exwife and such
Author's responseYeah, Willow's comment did hurt him but too bad she didn't see. Thanks for reviewing.
(#) theunspokentruth 2009-06-03 05:24:44 AMgah. This made my day. I have been waiting for you to update since forever. |; Ha.
That was really good, I kinda felt sorry for Gerard and all but he deserved it.
Willow a virgin, that was unexpected. :)
And ... Yeah.
Gerard still has his mood swings. He's such a poo head.
Trying to deny liking her.
Well anyway I have wasted the valuable time of everyone who has just read this! Wooo.
Author's responseHey thanks for the review, Jade. I enjoyed reading your thoughts and calling Gee a Poo Head made me laugh!
- wow i think Gerard really likes Willow. Well they will both give up because they'll be tired of avoiding their emotions. I'm really sad for Willow. I've always though that if i could read people's minds it would b so awesome. But Willow is so alone and she can't even fall in love freely.. well she won't be alone from now on...Guess, I'll have to wait for the next update..!:)
Author's responseThanks for the review. I'm glad you understand how much both of the characters are dealing with.