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His Princess

by hashimgambit 30 Reviews

what happens when Lily and James abandon their son because they thought he was a squib, what happens if a business associate from America, Tony Stark finds an abused Harry after a business event at...

Category: Harry Potter - Rating: PG-13 - Genres: Fantasy,Romance - Characters: Harry,Hermione - Warnings: [?] - Published: 2009/06/02 - Updated: 2009/06/03 - 607 words

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  • His Princess

    (#) Nautilus 2009-06-03 12:15:57 AM

    great looking forward to more,

    harry inherited tony's personality or has pepper had a hand in raising harry as well..

    looking forward to more.

    ta.
  • His Princess

    (#) jabarber69 2009-06-03 12:22:04 AM

    Nice start, interesting ideal but I do beleive clell65619 already beat you to the harry adopted by tony stark but at least in that story the dursleys abandoned hp, so definitely gonna be checking out your story...
  • His Princess

    (#) DarQuing 2009-06-03 12:22:25 AM

    I think you should continue it. It has an interesting opening and I look forward to your take on a Harry Potter/Ironman cross-over. :)
  • His Princess

    (#) Rob 2009-06-03 12:22:39 AM

    It was going pretty good till the fainting thing. How often does a healthy young guy faint?

  • His Princess

    (#) fic_reader1 2009-06-03 12:35:29 AM

    it was to short to say if it is going to be good or bad but it could be interesting
  • His Princess

    (#) steve2668 2009-06-03 12:42:07 AM

    So far so good, Looking foreward to more.

    Thanks
  • His Princess

    (#) phpp 2009-06-03 03:02:16 AM

    i found it short but good, to soon to say if its a good story, but hopful
  • His Princess

    (#) siledubhghlase 2009-06-03 04:10:56 AM

    Interesting start. Just keep writing and see where it goes.
  • His Princess

    (#) Qellar 2009-06-03 04:33:25 AM

    Sounds interesting, however there is already a similiar storyline Harry Potter and The Invincible Technomage
    by Clell65619.

    Your storyline better be different then one written by Clell65619 or you might get in trouble. :)
  • His Princess

    (#) rb8 2009-06-03 04:33:41 AM

    Nice writing, but you'll have to really make your story different from Clell's if you want to succeed. My opinion: Harry needs some kind of character flaw, it's not too fun to read about a hero who's practically perfect in every way.

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