what happens when Lily and James abandon their son because they thought he was a squib, what happens if a business associate from America, Tony Stark finds an abused Harry after a business event at...
great looking forward to more,
harry inherited tony's personality or has pepper had a hand in raising harry as well..
looking forward to more.
Nice start, interesting ideal but I do beleive clell65619 already beat you to the harry adopted by tony stark but at least in that story the dursleys abandoned hp, so definitely gonna be checking out your story...
I think you should continue it. It has an interesting opening and I look forward to your take on a Harry Potter/Ironman cross-over. :)
(#) Rob 2009-06-03
It was going pretty good till the fainting thing. How often does a healthy young guy faint?
it was to short to say if it is going to be good or bad but it could be interesting
So far so good, Looking foreward to more.
(#) phpp 2009-06-03
i found it short but good, to soon to say if its a good story, but hopful
Interesting start. Just keep writing and see where it goes.
Sounds interesting, however there is already a similiar storyline Harry Potter and The Invincible Technomage
Your storyline better be different then one written by Clell65619 or you might get in trouble. :)
(#) rb8 2009-06-03
Nice writing, but you'll have to really make your story different from Clell's if you want to succeed. My opinion: Harry needs some kind of character flaw, it's not too fun to read about a hero who's practically perfect in every way.
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