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Tempted

Mikey has more questions but then so does Gerard.

Category: My Chemical Romance - Rating: R - Genres: Romance - Characters: Bob Bryar,Frank Iero,Gerard Way,Mikey Way,Ray Toro - Published: 2009/06/09 - Updated: 2009/06/10 - 2472 words

Reviews

• So Shut Your Eyes

  (#) iwillstakeyourheart 2009-06-09 11:57:07 PM

  I'm enjoying this story. I think the ghost part of it is really interesting.
  
  C says he had an imaginary friend when he was a small kid, but says he can't remember it. His parents are the ones that remember it and they say he would sit in the spare room where his toys and stuff were and just be talking away to this imaginary friend. Then they said that one day it all just stopped and they asked him where the friend was and he said, "oh he had to leave". How fucking weird is that! lol
  
  Well anyway, your chapters always leave me wanting to know what's going to happen next!

  Author's response

  Thanks for sharing that story. That's interesting. It makes me think and I wish he remembered more. Anyway, thanks for the review. I'm so glad you are enjoying this story.

• So Shut Your Eyes

  (#) leeshdiddy22 2009-06-10 01:03:37 AM

  Another amazing update!
  Each chapter is a cliffhanger, it's awesome; But of course, I'm hungry for more of your delicious story.
  evil grin
  
  Heh.
  Update soon!!!
  
  leeshxx

  Author's response

  Thanks for the review. Believe it or not I really don't set out to end each with a chiffhanger but it just seems to happen. Wonder what you will think of the next chapter. LOL

• So Shut Your Eyes

  (#) Mz_sinner 2009-06-10 01:05:19 AM

  this is really awesome i was just talking about ghost last night actually lol imagine if willow went down to the cattacombs in paris that would be a interesting maybe even scary experience
  
  this was really good my fave bit was at the end lol oh the tempting how it grows and grows great chapter really i luv all this ghost stuffits so interesting

  Author's response

  I love all the ghost stuff because I live in a house that is over 100 years old and does have several ghosts. Really is does. Anyway, thanks for the review.

• So Shut Your Eyes

  (#) canustakemyheart 2009-06-10 01:25:23 AM

  I did have an imaginary friend but I don't remember it. It's the oddest thing because I remember a lot from my childhood. My parents said the imaginary friend's name was Beadie. Peculiar name for sure.
  
  Oh right! This chapter! It was great, as usual. Slowing building that connection ... and temptation. The G & W relationship aside, I can't wait to see what happens when they get to the Paramour.

  Author's response

  Gotta say I really want you to remember more about your imaginary friend. And I love the name. Think, damn it,think. LOL Anyway, thanks for the review.

• So Shut Your Eyes

  (#) lacerationgravityxxx 2009-06-10 03:09:28 AM

  oh wow! you never disappoint! i'm just sad i have to wait until Sunday for more!
  
  thank you!

  Author's response

  Well it's almost Sunday. LOL And sadly I'm having computer problems but I'm gonna try to post the next chapter, I promise. Thanks for the review.

• So Shut Your Eyes

  (#) HellOnHigh9 2009-06-10 03:23:08 AM

  hmmm gerard and willo interesting to see where that will go. Cant wait for more

• So Shut Your Eyes

  (#) broken_luck 2009-06-10 05:49:01 AM

  You've got me worrying about what will happen at the Paramour. I think it will bring everyone together though... I can't wait for more!

• So Shut Your Eyes

  (#) TheSnoo 2009-06-10 07:58:05 AM

  I'm really interested about what's going to happen at the paramour. I have a feeling that Gerard's mood swings will continue for some time.. Lol. I bet she tempts Gerard:D God. I wish he would give up and stop holding back!!! curious and waiting...:D

• So Shut Your Eyes

  (#) somethingorother 2009-06-10 12:38:27 PM

  Finally he admits it. I think that would definately be annoying to hear the same song over and over again like Willow does. At least he could switch it up once in a while.
  
  I'm so confused as to why Elena is there. I know she wants Willow to help Mikey and Gee but with what exactly? Helping Gerard get over his anger and hurt?
  
  So excited for more!

• So Shut Your Eyes

  (#) canustakemyheart 2009-06-11 09:50:39 PM

  p.s.
  
  I think I'm going to write an "out-take" for you [evil grin] ... stay tuned!!

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