A talk, a shower and a visit.
(#) kelly-khaos 2009-06-21 01:06:57 AMYay Gerard finally got to see his grandma! Which made this another super fantastic chapter. I can't wait for the next one. Update soon!
xoxo - Kelly
Author's responseThanks for the review, Kelly. Glad you enjoyed the chapter. I'm so silly but it made me smile when I wrote the part about Gerard seeing his grandma.
(#) canustakemyheart 2009-06-21 01:18:38 AM(C and I read this together!)
C says: Fuck yeah that was hot.
I says: HOT!
C says: That's never gonna work - he can't resist her - there's like paranormal intervention going on!
I says: Who did she see with Elena?
C says: Oh it's good he finally saw her - maybe he'll get that stupid ass idea out of his head that he's not meant to be with Willow.
I says: Yeah I agree.
C says: [snort] VELVETY!
Author's responseOh you guys crack me up! I loved the double review. And I like how nothing gets by I. That's all I'll say about that at the moment. Oh and believe me everytime I type the word Velvety I giggle and think of C!
- my god i nearly went into hyperventilation their!
that great gee got to see his grandma now to stop being a jackass >.<
Author's responsePoor Gee he wants so much to be in control of the situation but he's never met anyone like Willow before. And to be honest I kinda like to write jackass Gee. It's fun. Thanks for the review
(#) lacerationgravityxxx 2009-06-21 03:35:08 AMwow!
such a good chapter, and i have tears in my eyes typing this.
and i've just read C's review and whenever i read velvety, i smirk now! haha! his fault totally!
really brilliant, can't wait for more!
Author's responseI totally agree, C is a bad boy. I can't write now without the word "velvety" LOL Glad you liked the chaper.
(#) x_Charlie_x 2009-06-21 10:33:28 AMThat was so good!
I'm glad Gerard got to see his grandma... wonder who was with her tho..
I don't want Gerard to start being a dick to her again but it does mix things up a bit =)
Can't wait for the next installment!
Author's responseThanks so much for the review. What or who was with Elena and why Gee couldn't see it is interesting, isn't it?
(#) somethingorother 2009-06-21 09:53:05 PMI was gonna rate this but everyone beat me to the punch! Man...I feel so behind the times.
LOVED this chapter. I'm with canustakemyheart. Myabe he'll finally realize she is the one who can fix him and make him happy. Though I also kinda like the stuggle he has, just like in We Like Movies. As much as I hate seeing him treat Willow like crap, I like his progression from dick to kinda dick to loving husband/boyfriend/whatever. Does that make sense?
And velvety? I'm so out of the loop...
- Wow. Finally Gerard could see his grandmother. I really didn't think that the electricity thing could could pass Willow's ability. I don't want Gerard to change his mind because they both don't want to leave what they have now. I really wonder who was with Elena??? And I am still curious about the paramour.