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Blood of An Innocent
(#) fic_reader1 2009-06-21
I cant wait to see weree you take this. I have to ask though is this going to be a long story or a short one ? keep up the good workBlood of An Innocent
(#) kimr 2009-06-22
Eh?? Harry is dead, now what? The last two chapters have given a sense of finality to this story, should it not say complete, as there doesn't appear to be anything further to say or do. I think you needed to flesh out the chapters a bit more, to show that there might be hope on the horizon or some such thing.Blood of An Innocent
(#) ChiVayne 2009-06-26
So is there any more? Do we see everyone's reactions and Harry in Heaven with his parents, and Voldemort taking over? Or does Harry come back?Blood of An Innocent
(#) paulblay 2009-07-15
Leaving aside the occasionally dodgy English this story just feels too rushed.
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