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I pay it gladly

by Griever 1 Reviews

What if something went very wrong, at the most pivotal point. The beginning. A brief look at a road not traveled, and more stolen material than you can shake a stick at.

Category: Spider-Man - Rating: R - Genres: Drama - Characters: Peter Parker - Warnings: [!] [V] [?] - Published: 2009/06/28 - Updated: 2009/06/28 - 2329 words - Complete

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  • I pay it gladly

    (#) warjournalist 2010-03-04 10:45:18 PM

    This is a very interesting tale. The format is a little shaky; losing some of it's artistic effect to confusion here and there, but works very well as an insight into the mind. Excellent tale of what might have happened. And the 'mentoring' (?) from the man who would have been The Punisher is a nice touch. A continuance of some sort would be nice, but it's fine by itself too. Great work.

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