(#) kjp93 2009-07-04
well i liked it. i think you need a diffrent title though
I think it's a wonderful plot. Unfortunately, I think it would be a lot better with someone else writing it.
Interesting story, looking forward to seeing what happens with Harry’s Mind and what they do to Malfoy, something tells me he may not know what hit him. Your idea seems original, eagerly awaiting next chapter.
before I read more PLEASE put in more spaces between paragraphs in the story.
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