by DarkLordPandus
4 Reviews
Category: Harry Potter -
Rating: PG-13 - Genres: - Characters: -
Published: 2009/07/04 - Updated: 2009/07/08 - 6962 words
Reviews
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(#) kjp93 2009-07-04 10:14:32 PM
well i liked it. i think you need a diffrent title though
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I think it's a wonderful plot. Unfortunately, I think it would be a lot better with someone else writing it.
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(#) maddsloth 2009-07-07 12:35:56 AM
Interesting story, looking forward to seeing what happens with Harry’s Mind and what they do to Malfoy, something tells me he may not know what hit him. Your idea seems original, eagerly awaiting next chapter.
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(#) Dragen 2009-07-07 04:01:09 PM
before I read more PLEASE put in more spaces between paragraphs in the story.