Meeting the Head of House, meeting a potions master, a trip to the Hospital win and meeting’s with the headmaster
- i would have rather that dumbles think the fire was Dark rather then poppy telling him that it was phoenix... though i am sure you have your own machanics working around in your head... dumbles too quicky jumped to the 'wand is protecting' him... i would have liked to see a private conversation between Dumbles and Olivanders. now, wouldn't that make for an interesting conversation...
harry is perhaps a little toooo happy go lucky at times... i would not imagine that he would be comfortable rolign around with 2 girls... especially since he would have much experience with friends at all...
on the whole quite good, but i was looking for some nuturing to be required for harry to pull him out of his shelf.
- An excellent chapter, as for Snape I would bring him back with bad scars as a testament to the Judgement of a Phoenix at least so he can be kicked out of the school by Noticia and brought to task for all his misdeeds
As to other reviewers, the spell was cast in Harry's mindscape, no-one else in the class saw anything only that the two locked eyes and then all hell broke loose who's to say anything untoward happened, only Madame Pomfrey and Dumbles knew from her diagnosis spell.
(#) jabarber69 2009-07-18I think snape got what he deserves! his punishment should be: since the phoenix in harry's head locked snape mind and hit him with the phoenix fire, and since he is the first phoenix I doubt fawkes would or could heal snape, so I say again he got what he deserved, just move him to the permanent spell damage ward if he is still alive that is and then hire another potion teacher!
- Looking at the reviews as posted, I would disagree that Harry isn't too happy and go lucky ... If someone had come to me and offered what they had offered what Harry now has - unconditional "love"/"Caring" ... I think you'd be a happy go lucky person too.
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