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Ch 7 Summer Job

Tonks has a new pet

Category: Harry Potter - Rating: PG-13 - Genres: Humor - Characters: Harry,Tonks - Warnings: [?] - Published: 2009/07/27 - Updated: 2009/07/27 - 5065 words

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  (#) paulblay 2009-07-27 07:56:58 AM

  Nice story, would benefit from a beta reader if one could be found (although there are many fanfiction works with much worse English).
  
  'sltrips' -> 'strips'
  'room mate' -> 'roommate'
  'Severus head him off' -> 'Severus headed him off'
  'Harry realized there was it was a bit too tight for his present size' -> 'Harry realized that it was a bit too tight for his present size'
  'It tied to swipe her finger' -> 'It tried to swipe her finger'
  'I don’t Kit to just wander around' -> 'I don’t want Kit to just wander around'
  'slid the door owider' -> 'slid the door over'(?), 'wider'(?)
  'I miss you to' -> 'I miss you too'
  'she found the older girl’s antics to be amusing' -> '_he_ found the older girl’s antics to be amusing'

• The Thief of Hogwarts

  (#) NANLIT 2009-07-27 10:19:03 AM

  Good chapter. I thought the stuff with Kit was funny.
  
  Speaking of animaguses, what would Harry's animagus form (if he were to learn it) be in "Power of Oa"?

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  (#) bluminous 2009-07-27 10:47:21 AM

  He'd become a stag. like his biological dad.

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  (#) zicou 2009-07-27 01:52:26 PM

  this story is really, really awesome! i love it!!!
  Continuuuuuuuuuuue!
  Z.

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  (#) aqmy 2009-07-27 02:48:30 PM

  I. Love. It.
  
  Keep the chapters coming. ;)

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  (#) HopeBreaker 2009-07-27 04:53:48 PM

  I love this story please update soon

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  (#) JaCeeisme 2009-07-27 06:18:08 PM

  Awesome update, man. I like Power of Oa as well, but I LOVE this one. (That probably has to do with the fact I'm not a comic book reader, and haven't been for 40 years, so I'm a bit lost on the JL stuff)
  
  Love the Kit stuff. Remus & Sirius will never let him live down his marauder name. Also enjoying the twins reverence of Harry, and completely overjoyed at Albus and Snivellous thinking he's "normal."
  
  Please update this soon.
  
  JaCee

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  (#) Eragondude9 2009-07-27 08:32:47 PM

  Lmao The kitten stuff is funny. Hope you update soon.

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  (#) mrpietan 2009-07-27 09:32:29 PM

  another good update .. :)
  
  

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  (#) pakrat77 2009-07-30 01:09:14 PM

  great story. can't wait to read more

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