Tonks has a new pet
- Nice story, would benefit from a beta reader if one could be found (although there are many fanfiction works with much worse English).
'sltrips' -> 'strips'
'room mate' -> 'roommate'
'Severus head him off' -> 'Severus headed him off'
'Harry realized there was it was a bit too tight for his present size' -> 'Harry realized that it was a bit too tight for his present size'
'It tied to swipe her finger' -> 'It tried to swipe her finger'
'I don’t Kit to just wander around' -> 'I don’t want Kit to just wander around'
'slid the door owider' -> 'slid the door over'(?), 'wider'(?)
'I miss you to' -> 'I miss you too'
'she found the older girl’s antics to be amusing' -> '_he_ found the older girl’s antics to be amusing'
- Awesome update, man. I like Power of Oa as well, but I LOVE this one. (That probably has to do with the fact I'm not a comic book reader, and haven't been for 40 years, so I'm a bit lost on the JL stuff)
Love the Kit stuff. Remus & Sirius will never let him live down his marauder name. Also enjoying the twins reverence of Harry, and completely overjoyed at Albus and Snivellous thinking he's "normal."
Please update this soon.