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• A Little Less 16 Candles... continued...

  (#) charliexbrown 2009-08-02

  NO!!!!!!!!
  Andy! Joe! How are they gonna get out of this one?!
  
  I'm actually really enjoying this, there's so much suspense! Usually post-16 Candles fics aren't that good but I can honestly say I'm loving this one.
  
  Keep going! I wanna know what happens to Patrick!... bites nails

  Author's response

  Thanks!! I'm delighted you're enjoying it.
  
  I'm trying to tie it in with the video as much as I can. And sometimes giving reasons for little details that get mentioned or shown.
  For instance, at the start of the video, Patrick says the blend is failing. We know the priest gives him Holy Water for it and that now he's a vampire. It could only be regular water. But what Brendon's doing with that detail is just pure evil >:-}
  
  Thanks for reviewing!!
  Sas x

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  (#) _Amy_Revenge_ 2009-08-02

  Oh shit! That was totally unexpected! Sorry if I use too many of !! but I'm about to go to the store(for some lovely dovely sushi) so I'm a bit distracted. Anyhoo, looking forward for more!
  
  XD
  
  REVENGE

  Author's response

  You think that's unexpected? It was for Joe too, but you wait till Andy gets hold of him!
  
  Enjoy your sushi!!! Yummy stuff!!!
  Sas x

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  (#) ixamxnotxaxnugget 2009-08-02

  Poor Andy!!! D:
  
  And Joe and ahh.
  
  Cliffies!
  
  This review sucks.
  
  Loved it!
  :)
  
  update sooooon!

  Author's response

  Your review did not suck!! All reviews are wonderful and much appreciated! Thank you!!
  
  Yes, things are hotting up now. William's plan seems foolproof. But is it?
  
  Thanks again!
  Sas x

• A Little Less 16 Candles... continued...

  (#) nadialexandra 2009-08-03

  Ahh, shit. Why haven't I read this before now?! Fuck, Sas, this is incredible!
  
  Though, I've gotta say... can't Pete just turn Patrick to satisfy his craving and not kill him? It only seems logical; but since Pete still hasn't had his first drink, I don't know if he'd be able to control himself enough to turn Patrick rather than drain him. Oh, God. I love Patrick too much to even think about him dying in fanfiction. Dx
  
  And, damn! William's a clever one, ain't he? Tricking Andy into thinking Joe turned on them, and setting up the whole thing. This has taught me something: never underestimate the scrawny pretty-boy who can fit into your clothes... because he is most likely a vampire who will kidnap your heroes and have them kill each other. -nod- It totally makes sense.
  
  iloveitsomuchhhh.
  
  x-------- fuck that shit. You know who I am.

  Author's response

  This is a tricky one with Pete. He hates what Beckett did to him and I think it would be equally harrowing if he had to turn his best friend.
  But, right now, he's drained and starving. He needs blood desperately and unfortunately his vampire instincts are starting to kick in. Patrick is becoming less a friend and more of a meal. And he simply can't help himself.
  
  William is pure evil and won't be happy until he destroys their group and gets Pete under control. He's hoping that by making him kill Patrick, so taking his first human blood and turning everyone against Joe, that that will be sufficient. Failing that he believes that mind control and torture will bring Pete in line. Either way he's rid himself of the hunters.
  
  Now then... What could possibly cause his plan to fail? I wonder... Can it?
  
  Thanks, as ever, for the review. Hope you keep enjoying it!!
  
  Sas x
  
  I just re-read the last part of your review. I'm sitting in hospital having fainted with pain in the car park and they brought me back in. And what you wrote about 'the scrawny pretty-boy' made me smile :)
  Just wanted to say thanks, you really cheered me up.
  
  Sas x

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