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Reaver Legacy

by waterfox 5 Reviews

when Dumbledore left harry on the doorstep, harry's coin of fate was tossed, landing on one side he would defeat voldemort and be the pillar of goodness, on the other he would destroy voldemort and...

Category: Harry Potter - Rating: R - Genres: Crossover,Fantasy - Characters: Harry,Hermione,Luna - Warnings: [!!] - Published: 2009/04/21 - Updated: 2009/04/21 - 1182 words

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  • Reaver Legacy

    (#) juggler196 2009-04-21 11:07:26 PM

    Definitely an interesting start. I haven't hear of/read the other part of the crossover, but i'm always a fan of a story that turns the wizarding world on it's head. Not too much to say on the grammar/writing. Hope you continue the story.
  • Reaver Legacy

    (#) grookill 2009-04-21 11:32:10 PM

    Some grammar issues (check the punctuation!) but otherwise a good read. I'm kinda familiar with the various incarnations of Kane/Kain so this could be interesting. Personally though, I think turning Harry/Harrell into a Vampire will probably take the story too far out of the Harry Potter realm and deeply into the Legend of Kane for my liking. I'll have to read the next chapter or two to make a better determination.

    Good luck on writing this!
  • Reaver Legacy

    (#) gms 2009-04-22 03:25:44 AM

    sounds good so far
    keep writing and let's see how it turns out to be

    good luck
  • Reaver Legacy

    (#) Dragen 2009-10-26 08:56:54 AM

    Emmm, it is an interesting start, and I can't wait to see what you have planned next, keep up the great work, have you sorted out the pairings for t his story if so what are they. PLEASE not slash...
  • Reaver Legacy

    (#) deckman1063 2009-12-04 06:43:58 AM

    Interesting premise, not so good grammar, spelling, and word choice. There were many instances where you used the word "a" where "I" was meant, and "for history arbores a paradox" at the end of the chapter should be "for history _abhors_ a paradox". Still, interesting idea, and with some cleanup and maybe a beta reader you can improve on it.

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