(#) _Amy_Revenge_ 2009-08-14 01:19:38 AMThis bothered me the entire time I was reading: loquacious. I dunno what it means! ARG! I need vocab lessons, I swear LoL
LUUUUUUFF it :) Especially how Frankie blushes, and the hot nurse talks to him, and Thalia(oh saint Thalia lol) talked to him :) Wow..LOTS of faces tonight! Errr this morning? Ha ha wooooo!
Oooh and Cobra Starship?
Author's responseLoquacious means talkative haha. It's fine, I know like three good vocabulary words and the rest is fuckdamnshit.
Anyway, yeah! This chapter was supposeed to take a break from all the drama and depressing stuff, and it also introduced a couple of characters that are important later on...
Thank you for reading!
And YES Cobra Starship. You, my friend, have one point. That's one more than everyone else!
(#) lostmyfearoffalling 2009-08-14 07:31:15 AMWOW! Frankie's finally got something good in his life! YAY. I thought the thing with Elliot was kinda cute. I must admit, part of me was sad when he wasn't paired with Gerard haha. Amazing as usual!
Author's responseYeah, Elliot is a cutie :) And haha, you know, I was really thinking about making this a Frerard, you know? Because I just love writing that. But I thought, might as well do something different...and plus, I had to use all the characters I picked!
I'm happy with this story, because although I used audtitioned characters, it doesn't seem like I'm just trying to fit them all in; the chapters actually have substance.
Anyway, sorry, I'm about to start ranting. I should stop right here. Thanks for reading and reviewing!
(#) IeroMyHeroMCR 2009-08-14 02:03:02 PMWow i sound way prettier in here than in real life thanks :) haha now it's my turn to say i love you cause i do! You described me correct too like i always start with the eyes when i draw and i snap at people like with the whole 'what the fuck does that mean' before they can explain stuff... then i feel awfully bad and apologize. Hehe i keep on ranting i should stop, any whos great update!!!!!!!!!!!! I wish someone as gorgeous as Frank actually liked me oh well. Luff you (had to use Amy Revenges word haha)
Author's responseHaha, anytime. But y'know, when somebody has a crush on you, the never notice the flaws, just the good stuff :) And I'm sure you're gorgeous in real life anyway.
(#) KrissElECTRiKK 2009-08-14 03:25:08 PMI'm gunna try and guess the song of the next chapter, although I'm not that good with songs unless you count MCR and Tokio Hotel. =p
Author's responseHaha, well then goooood luck! I listen to weird songs. You might see some MCR if I decide to be nice, though :P