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• Dark Times Call for Dark Measures

  (#) Saicha6744 2010-11-08

  Not past but passed.
  Rob? I think it is robe.
  Try to avoid slang (like gotta). Only use it dialoges when nessasary.
  

  Author's response

  I'll try using gotta is a habit I have it's something I say alot. And when sometimes when I write I don't add a liter by mistake or the key stuck and I didn't see it becuase spell check didn't pick up on it cuz rob is a name so it wouldn't have picked up on it.

• Dark Times Call for Dark Measures

  (#) LittleMissNovella 2011-03-04

  You have a few spelling mistakes, but other than this is good!

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