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• So Shut Your Eyes

  (#) somethingorother 2009-08-22

  OoooOooo a new feeling. Hmmm...
  
  I love flying. Taking off and landing are my favorite parts. I wish I could do it more often.
  
  I hope he finally admits something to her at the Paramour. But then again I don't want him to so he can wallow in his misery and stupidity and selfishness by letting her go. Then he can come find her again and tell her everything. sigh I'm such a hopeless romantic...

  Author's response

  I do like to let him wallow. LOL. Thanks for the review. I don't mind flying but it's not one of my favorite things to do.

• So Shut Your Eyes

  (#) Mz_sinner 2009-08-23

  interesting
  i still wanna see what elena showed willow
  and this new feeling aswell is very interesting maybe they have different feeling for each emotion?and also that feeling she had that she wont ever see that room again is that a hint in anyway?
  and that whole discussion between mikey and gerard aswell was great
  and just gerard in general hsi feelings are still in turmoil i hoep he realizes he cares soon,also the paramour is something im looking forward to i wanna know if its gunna bring them together or tear them apart or both at the same time an i also wonder how mikey is gunna go at the paramour i mean thats the general reason their going their,and also why all his just happened now.
  
  ill stop their lol really good update more soon i hope :)

  Author's response

  Hey I love long reviews! As for a hint? Maybe, LOL. The Paramour is going to be intersting I promise.

• So Shut Your Eyes

  (#) TheSnoo 2009-08-23

  So did Elena tell Willow to heal Gerard's heart or something before she went away? I think she kind of managed that.
  The new feeling was interesting.
  
  Haha I saw myself in Willow while the take off.. Planes are uncomfortable and awkward. lol.
  The ending was sweet btw. Gerard's being more caring in every chapter. I don't really think that he can let her go.. If he's not that stupid as Mikey said.
  Now I'm excited for the Paramour. I bet that awkward ghost woman is still there..

  Author's response

  What Elena showed Willow is a very immportant part of the story. And the new feeling shows the depth of their connection. I'm with you about a take off. Makes my stomach drop.

• So Shut Your Eyes

  (#) X-InkyBlackLace-X 2009-08-23

  Aww...I just found that last bit really tender and sweet :3
  

  Author's response

  Yeah, I did too. Thanks for the review.

• So Shut Your Eyes

  (#) HellOnHigh9 2009-08-23

  excuse me for a second
  
  smacks gerard upside the head
  
  God he's such a guy! Just realise you have feelings for willow already! I cant wait to see how paramour goes and gerard's reaction when Willow leaves.

  Author's response

  Oh go ahead give him a smack. LOL

• So Shut Your Eyes

  (#) Christiexox 2009-08-24

  Again this is Tomgirl567! My account hates me! :C
  Awesome chapter! The last part was so sweet :) It made me happy! Gerard is an idiot! Ga!
  
  Tomgirl567 :S

  Author's response

  Hey Tomgirl, good to hear from you under any name. Thanks for the review.

• So Shut Your Eyes

  (#) canustakemyheart 2009-08-24

  You know, not a huge amount of time has elapsed in this story, so I think you're pacing is good for how the characters are interacting and why Gerard is still being torn by feelings.
  
  I feel something big is going to happen at the Paramour.

  Author's response

  Thanks for bringing up the timing. Yeah, sometimes it seems like they have known each other a long time because of the way the chapters are posted but the timeline of the story is different. Gerard still having trouble admitting his feelings does make sense. He and Willow haven't known each other all that long. Oh and he is pig headed. LOL Thanks for the reviw. I always love to hear what you think.

• So Shut Your Eyes

  (#) x_Charlie_x 2009-08-24

  My God he has to admit his feelings sometime!! Although I agree that with the timing and all he probably wouldnt have admitted anything yet.
  The last bit was really cute.
  I'm pretty excited to see what happens at the Paramore!

  Author's response

  Thanks for the review! Next chapter they arrive at the Paramour and things begin to happen right away.

• So Shut Your Eyes

  (#) rocker4lifeSAM 2009-08-24

  oh geez.
  the first time i flied i cried and cried and crieedd. of coarse i was like 7...it was still scary...
  
  
  annnddd Gerard and Willow confuse the hell outta me sometimes.
  =]

• So Shut Your Eyes

  (#) sickly_ill 2009-08-24

  That's weird. The feeling was gone for a moment then suddenly returned. I can't wait to see if Gerard will let her leave and then move on. I hope he doesn't. I think he's just scared like Willow about love. I think the sensation between them is the feeling of love and they were bound to find each other. I think it's Elena that is doing it. But what does she want? More please!?
  
  
  XOXOX ANDREA. =} =] =) :} :] :) ;} ;] ;) (ALL SMILLIES FOR YOU!)

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