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Smoking In the Boy's Room

Thus begins the decline...

Category: My Chemical Romance - Rating: PG-13 - Genres: Drama - Characters: Frank Iero - Published: 2009/08/25 - Updated: 2009/08/26 - 2943 words

Reviews

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  (#) baublehead66 2009-08-25 06:46:14 PM

  Brownsville Station. Motley Crue covered it in the 80's

  Author's response

  WOW. I totally expected people to know just the Motley Crue version, that's why i said hair metal.
  
  But good job. That is correct.

• Borderline

  (#) IeroMyHeroMCR 2009-08-25 06:59:12 PM

  Ah i was totally going to say that cry haha any ways is that supposed to be Quinn Allman (just wondering cause i know his cousin and his cousin is gorgeous like him). There is nothing bad to say about this, i think this was an amazing chapter. Poor Frankie and then there's Ash... Ash is a bad egg. Haha that came out of no where... bad egg? I sound like an old person now. I liked this chapter and i'm sure other people wil too, so great chapter :)

  Author's response

  Haha yeah, Quinn Allman. DUDE, he is so sexy. love him.
  
  And yes, Ash iss a bad egg. Thanks for reading and reviewing :)

• Borderline

  (#) JellyPen 2009-08-26 05:17:13 AM

  This chapter was awwesomme! Yer, Ash sounds dodgey :S
  Awww at Frankie though :(
  
  Please update soon!!!
  
  ____________________________________
  
  love Jace the JellyPen x

  Author's response

  Thankss

• Borderline

  (#) _Amy_Revenge_ 2009-08-26 01:13:19 PM

  Quin started screaming? Why-uh oh, either they're gonna get him in trouble or there was something in those ciggs...O_O RUN, Frankie, RUN!
  
  So I'm a bad egg..I take pride in it, Nikaa!(You should totally use that word!)
  
  I wonder..if Ash was the one who dropped the books? Or if that was a different kid? LoL I'm really tired right now, so I probably don't make much sense u_u
  
  Anyway, flippin' AMAXING chapter :)
  
  Revenge

  Author's response

  Haha, you'll see. It's not nearly as exciting as it seems. Actually it's not exciting at all.
  
  But thanksss you.

• Borderline

  (#) MyFamousLastWords 2009-08-26 01:18:45 PM

  Fail, fail. Someone got the song before me!
  
  I just started reading this story today and it's pretty damn awesome.
  
  F oxox.

  Author's response

  Ha, well at least you knew the song :)
  
  Thanks for reading.

• Borderline

  (#) bloodstainedbest 2009-08-26 05:22:15 PM

  OOOHHHHH I totally called that it was Quinn Allman! I love this story. Ash is an arse. Oh well.....MORE SOON!!!

  Author's response

  Danke sie. I'm workin on the next chapter...

• Borderline

  (#) _Amy_Revenge_ 2009-09-08 10:16:51 AM

  This totally just occurred to me, but if Frank ever runs into Ash again.. y'know, when he's having flash blacks.. Ash's full name is Ashley, but he hates it because it's so un-tough.. He'll brutally murder (or at least try) anyone who calls him Ashley.
  
  :)

• Borderline

  (#) kirrahdiviney 2011-06-21 11:06:01 PM

  naww its been ages since its been updated :( thats depressing, i only started reading today baha. bummer. amazing story though
  - kirrah xx

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