A conversation, and hurt.
- Hi there,
The end of this was so sad. I could feel my eyes watering up for Bob and his fear of losing his mother.
I love the matchings for health class. Especially Frank and Lisa. LOL his interest are shooting things!!
It was cute that Bob and Desirae got matched and had their first conversation. Frank is sweet in telling her to give him a chance.
It must be tough for Shanna, watching her mother dying and her brother along with her. No wonder she didn' want to go back in the house.
Looking forward to more when you get a chance.
Author's responseHey there.
Yes, we're finally getting a look from Bob's pov. He's terrifed of losing his mother, you'll find out why very soon.
With health class could this mean him and Desirae become closer? Will Frank and Lisa get along after all?
Frank is a good advice giver...sometimes lol!
Shanna will make more appearances from now. It's all gonna get more interesting. Thank you for reviewing, I appreciate it.
(#) MyFamousLastWords 2009-09-05 12:00:58 PMYes, the end of this chapter was sad. How the two of them are quite similar but they don't know it.
Aw, Frank is so sweet.
Author's responseHi (:
The end was a bit sad, but maybe with time it will get better.
Frank is a sweetie isn't he? (:
Thank you for reviewing.
(#) sickly_ill 2009-09-05 04:03:07 PMDude, I do that all the time with my stories. Map it all out then end up changing it. Anyway, great chapter. I know how Bob feels. My cousin is sick and he will eventually go blind. Well, that's what I heard. I feel helpless. I can't do anything to help, but give him the best before that happens.
XOXOX ANDREA. =}
Author's responseYeah it happens to me all the time, it sucks. But eh...
I'm sorry about your cousin, he's in my prayers. Hope all gets well.