- Hi there,
Poor Kimberlee and Lisa they don't seem to be enjoying this project at all.
I loved how you wrote this the awkwardness of it all. You could feel the tension and Desirae's attempts to get Bob to say anything.
She does have one up on him, knowing Shanna gives her a little better insight as to what's going on in his life. While he has no idea of the torment she lives with day to day.
Looking forward to more.
Author's responseHey there.
Yes, Kimberlee and Lisa need time to adapt to their project,but hopefully they'll learn to get along.
Bob is opening up, but being careful of what he says. He needs a little more time to become warmed up. Thankfully Shanna is there to break the ice some more (: The awkwardness will hopefully fade (:
Thank you for the review (:
(#) MyFamousLastWords 2009-09-12 12:05:37 PMThis chapter was sort of calm, and cool I guess and awkward! Nicely written.
Yeah, she knows more about him than he does her, he's totally oblivious to her whole life frankly.
Can't wait for more!
Author's responseThanks. Awkwardness is pretty much all Desirae has to work with. In time it will fade, and more words will be spoken. I can't promise the couple chapters will be calm, but next one should be....
Yes, Bob has no idea the pain she faces when she goes home. He'll have to find out eventually, but not yet.
Thank you for the reivew.
(#) IeroMyHeroMCR 2009-09-12 08:23:03 PMSorry i didn't review the other chapter, i didn't see it when it was posted.
This chapter was great, it was nice that her father wasn't in it.
I love how you describe Frank XD
Their awkwardness makes me laugh, hopefully they won't be so awkward after they start talking more.
I love this, please update soon!!!
Author's responseNo problem, thank you for reviewing anyways (:
Frank definitely is quite a character, you'll find out more about him soon. Her father...not so much. His wrath will unfortunately not end.
The awkwardness...yeah let's hope it goes away. The more they talk, the less it will be. Next chapter shouldn't be as much (:
Thanks for the review.
(#) sickly_ill 2009-09-13 03:10:57 PMI hope Bob and Desirae make some more convo in the next chapter. Maybe they can become friends. Who knows? Only you do. Update soon!
XOXOX ANDREA. =}
PS. My little sister's name is Desirae, but it's spelled like this: Desiree. Same name but different spelling.
Author's responseHi. I'm sorry for prolonging the talk. They'll hopefully interact more with the upcoming chapters. Desirae has secrets, and Bob has secrets. They can't be secrets forever..so..
Really? I love the name Desiree, I just changed the letters for other purposes...but that's cute (:
Thank you for the review! xoxo
(#) _Amy_Revenge_ 2009-11-08 09:12:21 PMHey, how did you make those butterfly things in the last two chapters? They looked really cool! I suspect Alt codes?
I think that this chapter was loverly :) And I'm off to read the next one!
Author's responseHehe I just copied and pasted it. I got it from somewhere, and just copy it (: