Is there anything you wouldn’t do to stay beautiful? A one-shot inspired by my favourite novel, and the recent UK film based on it.
Magical! Simply magical! Extraordinarily well written! Fantastic description, painting a very colourful picture, so vivid I could see and feel it all. I sincerely hope you're very proud and happy with this one-shot - you should be!!
That was amazing! I agree with areyounormal - the description was incredible!
The idea of the act of capturing innocence being the very thing that causes it to be lost was very striking.
This was beyond wonderful, you can literally paint pictures with your words charlie! I saw everything perfectly Pete's innocent face, Joes determinTion and dissapotment and I loved it, This was a great one shot probably, one of my favorite on this site great job!
I want to leave you another review, because this was just so damn good and I had to say it again!!
Brilliant! Totally inspired!
There, now this story is as highly rated as you can get :) enjoy the green highlight, this story deserves it!
Not really a review as such (but I'd be more than happy to say again how great it is!!), but was wondering if you'd like to drop me a line? You're such a great writer, I think it would be fun to exchange ideas, opinions and stuff. Anyhoo, s'up to you, but if you'd like to it's email@example.com :)
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