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• So Shut Your Eyes

  (#) sblood311 2009-09-22

  Sad. Poor Willow. It seems so painful, loving someone who won't love you back. So much hurt. Poor girl. Loved the chapter... usually do.

  Author's response

  I too feel sorry for Willow at this point but it's hard not to feel bad for Gee too. He is fighting with his own emotions so much. Anyway, thanks so much for the review.

• So Shut Your Eyes

  (#) HellOnHigh9 2009-09-22

  poor willow. I mean I love gerard but he can be a total douche at times and jessica is just a dirty ho.
  Loved it btw.

  Author's response

  LOL yep that's what Jessica is. Thanks for the review.

• So Shut Your Eyes

  (#) canustakemyheart 2009-09-23

  I see this whole chapter as a test. Maybe the characters don't even actively know it, but it's totally a test.
  
  And that was a real dick move on Bob's part. But Jessica is so vapid - she couldn't even think of an actual important something to say to him. I'd like to know what else he said to her back at her hotel room.

  Author's response

  Oh you always see beyond the words. That's great. Hey here's an idea. Why don't you write a short story telling just what happened when he got to Jessica's room? You know some of what she said to him. I'd love to have you do that if you have the time and want to.
  
  Oh crap I forget something. There is something else Jessica tells him that he tells Willow in the next chapter. So if you do want to write something for this just send me an e-mail (my contact info is on my page) and I'll tell you what it is.

• So Shut Your Eyes

  (#) Christiexox 2009-09-23

  poor willow. i'm so sorry for willow! D:
  gee is being a prick i loved this chapter! :D more plz!
  
  tomgirl567 :S

  Author's response

  Hey tomgirl - Glad you liked the chapter. Thanks for reviewing.

• So Shut Your Eyes

  (#) x_Charlie_x 2009-09-23

  THAT MAN!
  I suppose I can see why he'd feel like he had to atleast hear her out, but to go back to her room with her? But I suppose he did leave and return to Willow, and I'm glad he explained it all to her. But I'm feeling really bad for Willow at the moment...
  
  I absolutely hate Jessica. Gerard has his moments but deep down I do believe he is a good guy, that's why he feels the guilt and some of the anger, but she's just a whore really.
  
  I'm not too happy with Bob at the moment either!
  
  Still, love the story though!! Can't wait for saturday

  Author's response

  Think how hard it was for Willow because she "knew" what Jessia was planning but what could she do? She knew if she told Gerard it would piss him off because he has to think he's so in charge of his life. And yeah, Bad Bob. LOL

• So Shut Your Eyes

  (#) TheSnoo 2009-09-23

  Geeze.. when will Jessica give up??
  You know I really think that Bob has a crush on Willow.
  
  The things Willow has done and maybe will do for Gerard... and he is still not aware of it. I'm sad for Willow.
  But great chapter!

  Author's response

  Glad you liked the chapter. It's hard not to feel sorry for Willow, I agree. Thanks for the review.

• So Shut Your Eyes

  (#) AshleyBaby 2009-09-23

  You are a very talented writer and I really liked this story til this chapter. It really turned me off. How can ANYONE think that sex in the ass I sexy? For fuck sakes, shit comes out of there. Its the most unhygenic part of the body. Whatevs.
  
  Everything else to that point was decent.

• So Shut Your Eyes

  (#) lacerationgravityxxx 2009-09-23

  oh God!
  
  that was tough. emotional. fucking hell. i feel so much for Willow. she is so new to it all, including having sex. i just want her protected. i don't want her hurt. i'm referring more to the emotional side. it is so tough.
  
  thank you. you know i love this story.

• So Shut Your Eyes

  (#) sickly_ill 2009-09-23

  I think Willow should not give Gerard any for a while. Maybe he'll realize he needs her and he loves her, not just using her. But, that's my suggestion. Anyway, update soon! And I'll review soon!
  
  XOXOX ANDREA. =}

• So Shut Your Eyes

  (#) canustakemyheart 2009-09-23

  I don't think the contact form works on ficwad here ... email me at canustakemyheart(at)gmail(dot)com
  
  =)

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