Desirae is invited into the Bryar house...
(#) MyFamousLastWords 2009-09-26 01:27:49 PMI've just realised how the situation between Bob and Desirae is quite like the situation I was in! Anywho...
At the Desirae (-having a tea party-) part I thought Bob was going to go all Jack the Ripper on us and rape her and kill her. But that's just me.
I can't wait until they get closer!
War out, F oxox.
Author's responseThat's umm an interesting thought? Lol.
I'll be writing the next chapter and they'll definitely get closer (:
Thank you for your reviews!!!
(#) sickly_ill 2009-09-26 02:03:15 PMI get a feeling Bob and Desirae are gonna get pretty close. They'll become friends and hang out. Wait, I don't think Desirae can hang out. But they could become friends. Update soon!
XOXOX ANDREA. =}
Author's responseThey'll definite hang out more, but you are right about her not being able to. How would her father react?
You'll see next chapter (:
Thank you for the review, I appreciate it.
- They're finally getting to know each other. That was sweet when he remembered that she had to write a poem.
Poor Bob seemed so shocked when he found Diserae sitting in his backyard.
I'm looking forward to seeing how this relationship develops.
Great job as usual.
Author's responseHi there.
Yes finally I get the ball rolling lol. Bob remembered, and that really counts for something since Desirae often feels forgotten...
Lol. Poor thing seeing a girl in his backyard. Definitely some explaining to do next chapter (:
Thank you for the review. Always appreciated.
(#) Zipitmonkey 2009-10-06 07:53:40 AMThis story is perfect.
I don't read alot of fan fic anymore but out of all the stuff i've read and written
This is by far my favourite
Please write more soon.
Author's responseThank you so much for the compliment. I love getting new readers, and I'm glad you like it.
Thanks again for the review, always appreciated.
(#) _Amy_Revenge_ 2009-11-08 09:21:02 PMOoh, I sure hope they see more of each other! This story is beginning to look up :) I'm just sad that I got caught up (lol) in other things instead of reading this chapter by chapter (when you posted them)
Author's responseThanks Amy (: And it's okay.