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While You Were Sleeping

by Moonshyne 3 Reviews

We find out what happens to Alyssa as well as what happen's while Sarah is sleeping

Category: My Chemical Romance - Rating: R - Genres: Angst,Drama - Characters: Bob Bryar,Ray Toro - Warnings: [!!!] [R] [Y] - Published: 2009/10/03 - Updated: 2009/10/03 - 2290 words

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  • Getting My Baby Back

    (#) shehadtheworld12 2009-10-03 12:57:50 PM

    What a twist!!! I'm practically in tears reading about Emily, and just wow...This is such a good twist, and I'm glad Sarah saw what was happening, I just hope it lasts? I'm looking forward to more, and I can't wait to read about Alyssa and Gerard since Bob slashed her phone! Just WOW! (:

    Amazing job as always.

    xoxo

    Author's response

    Hi there,

    Thanks so much on the twist. Do you know how long I've been waiting to write this?

    The part with Emily was difficult to write because the whole time she equated what her "father" was doing was love and now she finally knows it's not. Sarah now understands that neither her nor Lawrence right now are suitable parents. Emily will be staying put. There maybe one or two more chapters then an epilogue depending how big I want to make the next chapter.

    Now that the Emily issue is resolved we can start to resolve who Alyssa will end up with. Will it be the love of her life or the father of her child that has been her rock and twice has given her the greatest gift in the world. Hmmmm. We'll just have to see.

    I'll just say I to make sure nothing is written without a further purpose.

    I've already started hopefully sometime this week.
  • Getting My Baby Back

    (#) areyounormal 2009-10-03 01:41:14 PM

    Wow!!! Wow!!! Wow!!! That was so intense and heartbreaking!! I can't even begin to tell you how moving and sad and real that felt! Perfectly written and just incredible. I can't wait for that evil twisted bastard to get what's coming to him!

    Simply amazing!!

    Sask x

    Author's response

    Hi there Sas,

    Thank you so much Sas I really appreciate the compliment. I hope it wasn't too hard to read.

    We'll just have to see, won't we?

    I think one last chapter and the epilogue and I'm finally done!!

    Thanks so much for the review.
  • Getting My Baby Back

    (#) doyleangel 2009-10-05 11:51:05 AM

    I can't believe lawerence actually did that to her. I thought that Sarah would stop it before he had that chance. I'm disgusted by him.

    Also, I think Alyssa needs to admit she still loves Gerard and be with him and stop stringing Bob along or just let Gerard go and be with Bob. She's confusing two men and it probably hurts both of them.

    update soon!

    Author's response

    Hi there doyleangel,

    Yes Lawrence is a sick bastard. Unfortunately that even though she didn't take the drugs that night having them in her system for so long it still made her drowsy. Yes the whole situation is disgusting.

    I believe Alyssa has admitted she still loves Gerard but thinks she can't be with him. Will someone make her mind up for her?

    It definitely looks like she's hurting both.

    I believe we will have an answer soon.

    Thanks so much for the review!!

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