- I'm sorry to say that this story was a profound dissapointment. There could have been so much done with this plot line. I have actually never encountered anything similar to it as it is quite original. May I ask what made you cut the story short like that? Lack of ideas? No desire to continue? I only hope that one day some author reads this, realizes it's potential, and gain permission to rewrite it. I feel the need to stress that I am not saying the story was bad in any way, in fact I enjoyed it untill the end. I am only disappointed with how it was ended so abruptly.
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