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The Truth

by Clell65619 2 Reviews

On his 16th Birthday Dumbledore presents Harry with a surprise. He's married.

Category: Harry Potter - Rating: R - Genres: Drama,Humor - Characters: Harry,Marietta Edgecombe - Warnings: [X] [?] - Chapters: 3 - Published: 2009/10/14 - Updated: 2010/01/21 - 37184 words - Complete

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  • The Truth

    (#) raitono 2010-01-22 09:02:04 PM

    I'm sorry to say that this story was a profound dissapointment. There could have been so much done with this plot line. I have actually never encountered anything similar to it as it is quite original. May I ask what made you cut the story short like that? Lack of ideas? No desire to continue? I only hope that one day some author reads this, realizes it's potential, and gain permission to rewrite it. I feel the need to stress that I am not saying the story was bad in any way, in fact I enjoyed it untill the end. I am only disappointed with how it was ended so abruptly.
  • The Truth

    (#) Dragonlord27 2010-08-26 03:35:45 PM

    there wear some nice ideas here although I think that one could get a lot more out of a plot like this. it just felt like you just rushed it without fleshing it out

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