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Dachau Diaries

by CrackbunnySyndrome 2 Reviews

"'Arbeit macht frei'. It is a lie. Work does not set us free from this hell, save by death. We will be free when we are dead, and buried in the mass graves with our friends. Our brothers and sister...

Category: Full Metal Alchemist - Rating: PG-13 - Genres: Action/Adventure - Characters: Alphonse Elric, Edward Elric, Maes Hughes - Warnings: [!!!] [V] - Published: 2006/04/12 - Updated: 2006/04/12 - 4276 words

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  • Balance of Power

    (#) makani 2006-04-13 10:29:56 AM

    I'm still keeping up with this story with enthusiasm. :o) It continues to be a good read, and the story is going into more depth than I had imagined.

    A chapter or two ago, there was a part that talked about how Ed was feeling miserable about Noah being left behind, and it sounded to me like he was in love with her--nice to know I'm right, but before that, why did he tell the pouncing store clerk he had no girlfriend?

    Author's response

    Mainly because the store clerk had caught him offguard with the comment. Also, he's not the most open of people, so admitting that he even had a relationship would be rather difficult for him.

    I'm glad you're enjoying the story so far! We'll keep the chapters coming, or try to, anyway.

    -llynquennel
  • Balance of Power

    (#) kelpy 2006-04-20 07:38:00 PM

    Wow, your story is amazing. I've only just started getting interested in fanfiction for Full Metal Alchemist, but I'm already completely hooked on your story. I really enjoy your style of writing too, which is rare for me. I'm quite picky. ^^" In other words, please, please, please update soon?

    Author's response

    We should be updating soon, once real life stops biting two of the authors in the rear. And I'm glad to hear you like the writing style; it's nice to see the writing styles of three authors can blend that well. Thanks for the review! ~llynquennel

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