I think you're going to like this one (:
- Hi me again,
I really loved this chapter. The friendship between her and Shanna is amazing, they both need to have that person who is behind them 100%. It was sweet that she took her to her favorite spot and it had the same effect on Shanna.
I didn't expect Desirae to tell Bob so soon, but the moment felt right. Though he realizes it or not he needs someone to talk to. She knows how it feels though in many ways she doesn't. She was so young when her mother passed away though she feels the reprecussions every day she just didn't have the understanding at the time.
I know it sounds confusing I just think that though she does understand at the same time she can't really. Anyway I really loved the interaction between the two of them. It's a natural flow.
Looking forward to the next update.
One a side note; I hope your mom's okay and will be better soon.
Author's responseHey Moonshyne :)
I agree, they do need to have someone they feel they could trust. It was a real moment for Desirae having to share her favorite spot, but she knew it was a good enough reason. Shanna will begin to realize how special one place can be, if you take the time to appreciate it.
I know, I wasn't sure if I had rushed it, but I don't want to lag anymore, and I've been waiting patiently to write the main ideas, I wanted to for the longest time. Desirae can relate to an extent, with having several memories of her mother, but then she wasn't able to witness her mother dying everyday, so I think I get what you are trying to say.
Thank you as ever for reviewing, I really appreciate it.
Thank you again, my mom is feeling a lot better, still sore, but she's very active so she doesn't stay down for too long lol (:
(#) sock_monkey 2009-10-17 11:18:26 AMThis was a great chapter. I really love this story and the way you're writing it. It's very full of emotion and i think it fits with the plot line. Update soon please. ps. i hope your moms ok and gets better soon!
Author's responseThank you for the kind words, I really appreciate that.
Thank you again, my mother is healing up fairly well. Thank God (:
(#) MyFamousLastWords 2009-10-17 04:02:07 PMI know I always seem to come out with random crap, but I think I said this before, but this story really, really reminds me of flowerly dresses! Anyway, as that was pointless.
I do indeed love this friendship Desirae and Shanna has. I find it cute, as Desirae is older then Shanna. And Bob is starting to open up and we're getting to know more, it's great.
Author's responseLol, that's an interesting thought.
Desirae and Shanna are pretty cute aren't they? Bob will show more of his soft side hopefully, and I'll be abe to start writing the main parts I've been waiting to write (:
Thank you as always for reviewing.
(#) sickly_ill 2009-10-21 08:38:44 PMAH! Bob and Desirae sitting in a tree K-I-S-S-I-N-G! I'm so happy! They're getting closer and closer to one another everday. If she just steps a little more she could admit the thing about her dad. Or not, but someone has to know. I'm like Desirae in a way. I'm a good listener. I like helping people, but when it comes to me my lips are sealed and I never let anyone help me. They're getting to know each other a little better now, and that's a healthy relationship there. Update real soon!
XOXOX ANDREA. =}
Author's responseHi Andrea, I'm happy you liked this one. Maybe she will confide about her dad. I'm the same way. I'm so happy I can start writing what I had planned in the first place. Thank you so much for your reviews (: