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by waterfox 3 Reviews

Category: Harry Potter - Rating: G - Genres: Crossover - Characters: Harry - Warnings: [?] - Published: 2009/10/23 - Updated: 2009/10/23 - 1576 words

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  • Reaver Legacy

    (#) Dragen 2009-10-26 09:07:28 AM

    You need to sort out the spacing of the pargarghs... as they are TOO close to read the story and making it hard to read so could you PLEASE sort it out.
  • Reaver Legacy

    (#) Lord_Frodo 2009-10-26 05:41:34 PM

    Interesting, very interesting.
    I don't believe O have ever encountered a story with this particular crossover.
    if you do it well it will be excellent and so far I am enjoying it.
    a few minor things, use some sort of spell check to catch some errors, and split scenes and POV changes a bit more obviously.

    hope you continue to write this.
  • Reaver Legacy

    (#) zackseawolf 2009-10-31 03:39:00 AM

    It has a lot of potential, there are some minor issues that a beta could probably work out for you. Your writing is very eloquent, but you kinda skim over a lot of things that would make the story more understandable. Other than that and a few other minor flaws it has the makings of a great fanfic! keep it up

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