Willow believes her dream is lost. Mikey tells Alicia a brutal truth.
(#) sblood311 2009-10-24 11:38:14 PM
... a little filler perhaps? It was still good though. I can't wait for more.
Actually it wasn't filler but I can't point out why. Later in the story it will make sense. Thanks for the review.
(#) Mz_sinner 2009-10-24 11:41:53 PM
loved it :)
wat did mikey see?
i hope th enext chapter is gunna give me some answers
great work loved it :)
What Mikey saw is very important. That's all I'll say. LOL Thanks for the review
(#) HellOnHigh9 2009-10-25 12:35:34 AM
very well written I want to know what Mikey saw and what gerard is doing for willow aside from paying all those bills.
Thanks so much. I was hoping the writing was okay. I've been sick for the last two weeks so I wasn't sure.
(#) TheSnoo 2009-10-25 02:22:59 AM
I guess that's gonna be a loong night for Gerard and Willow. I'm curious about everything.. Gerard's plan.. the things Mikey saw and of course the rest of the night. lol
I'm so glad you are enjoying the story. Gerard's plan will be revealed soon.
this is so good.
i want to know what Mikey saw? don't leave us suffering Mrs!
i think Willow is not going to take the news of Gerard settling her debts very well at all.
can't wait for more.
Is is bad I kinda like leaving you suffering? LOL Thanks for the review!
(#) hey_nena 2009-10-25 12:55:15 PM
This is one of my favorite chapters so far.
There were a few simple typos but didn't disrupt the flow of my reading.
Lacerationgravityxxx pretty much said the rest!
Sorry about the typos. Like I said I've been sick and I really tried to catch them all. Thanks for the review
(#) Larka 2009-10-26 06:03:40 AM
yeah! i loved that. this is one of my favorites now. :D When are Willow and Gerard going to talk?!?! more plz!
Thanks tomgirl, Gerard and Willow do have trouble communicating.