That chapter was so great on so many levels. I love Halloween and you really captured the anticipation of a young child on that night. From the adults who dress at the door, decorated haunted houses and kids being scared at the monster costumes. It was spot on.
But the biggest treat of the chapter was the kiss. It seemed just right. I was begging in my mind Bob please don't make the same mistake again. But thankfully he didn't take it any further.
He was so sweet to carry her off to bed, while I'm sure she dreamed of the new possibilities that could happen.
I really love this story and can't wait to read more.
Author's responseHey there (:
I like Halloween too, but lately where I live no one really has the spirit anymore...I tried my best to describe the scenes.
I can't believe I actually wrote the kiss scene, I just thought it was a perfect moment to do so, Tissa realizes that maybe Bob has changed, and that her grudges shouldn't be held anymore. I have some more plans for this, and then I may end it...but not right now (:
Thank you as always
(#) _Amy_Revenge_ 2009-11-28Ah, so cute! She should definitely go back out with Bob (and a mysterious Amy should shag Gerard xD). It would probably be good for Ashia :)
You said you had that chapter so.. I rushed over to see it xD But it isn't here! Well, actually, it might be now. I've been known to not see things that are right in front of my face:)
Author's responseTissa and Bob will figure out how they feel towards each other...but some explaining will come first (:
Yes a 'mysterious' Amy might happen to appear out of somewhere xD
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