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Bleeding wrist/Bleeding hearts

by lilyqueen777 2 Reviews

hmm...out of my impulses and seeing a blade used to make fruit juice...just something that i think cutters would relate to. please r/r!

Category: Poetry - Rating: PG-13 - Genres: Angst, Drama - Characters:  - Published: 2006/04/13 - Updated: 2006/04/13 - 41 words - Complete

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  • Bleeding wrist/Bleeding hearts

    (#) MarkPoa 2006-04-14 07:58:05 PM

    I liked how the poem flows... until the end. I just don't feel the last line has enough of an impression. The earlier part seemed stronger.

    Author's response

    thanks. i will work on it! :)
  • Bleeding wrist/Bleeding hearts

    (#) InuKag 2006-04-28 11:56:30 AM

    Being somebody who has gone through the pain and struggle of cutting, the urges, everything, this really was a good short to relate to.

    Author's response

    thank you so much! i'm glad u can relate. i only cut myself once, and then realized not to do it again!

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