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You Hold Me Down

by oxdikeyatbestxo 3 Reviews

[Ryden] Ryan Ross wasn't himself when he drank, and Brendon hated it.

Category: Panic! At The Disco - Rating: R - Genres: Angst,Drama,Romance - Characters:  - Warnings: [X] [R] - Published: 2009/11/15 - Updated: 2009/11/15 - 2170 words - Complete

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  • You Hold Me Down

    (#) thehagensong 2009-11-18 04:03:23 PM

    This is amazing. :D
    I love how Ryan's referred to as kid and Brendon's referred to as kid's friend. I love it.

    Author's response

    ^^ thank youuu! I love how out of like 40 views, you're the only one to comment :P
    ha, but thanks. I thought perhaps the whole switch from 1st person to 3rd person would get confusing. But apparently not so yayyy :D
  • You Hold Me Down

    (#) X-InkyBlackLace-X 2009-11-25 09:49:09 AM

    Wow. That was amazing...apart from the fact im crying ;_;
    You're a very talented writer :3

    Author's response

    awwwh! thank you. (: haha, I was rereading this a while ago, and I almost started crying. :P super egoistic, I know.
  • You Hold Me Down

    (#) XxPerfectTomorrowxX 2012-10-01 10:39:03 PM

    I really, really loved this and it is cute how they are referred to as kid, and kid's friend but after a while it just gets repetitive and a bit hard to read.
    But it was good, really sad but good.

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