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Its Not Confidential I've Got Potential

Franks a stripper Gerard goes into the club everyday just to see the guy he thinks he could fall for. Things get going. Frank opens up about the trauma in his past causing Gee to fall in love ...

Category: My Chemical Romance - Rating: G - Genres: Romance - Characters: Frank Iero,Gerard Way,Mikey Way - Published: 2009/11/30 - Updated: 2009/12/01 - 8807 words - Complete

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• Its Not Confidential I've Got Potential

  (#) bubbly-gum 2009-11-30 06:38:51 PM

  Fucking love it! I lol'd so much. Bert being called Mr Winks. Ge-ni-us!
  Favourited it!
  
  xoxo Sam

• Its Not Confidential I've Got Potential

  (#) sock_monkey 2009-11-30 07:46:31 PM

  woah. That was awsome! I really loved the plot line. But it could have been better. I think it would be easier to read if you put periods after EVERY sentence and " " every time someone speaks. Like, I love you Gerard said would be "I love you" Gerard said. And if the thinking parts were italicised like, "/you're falling for him/" frank thought to himself. Other than that i thought it was great! xo-Erin

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