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Wounds

by _xmikaylamcrx_ 2 Reviews

Until now she was just a fan,little did she know that night she would become a very big part of the My Chem family.[p.s. this is my first fanfiction so it might not be good at first]

Category: My Chemical Romance - Rating: R - Genres: Romance - Characters: Bob Bryar,Frank Iero,Gerard Way,Mikey Way,Ray Toro - Warnings: [V] [X] - Published: 2009/12/20 - Updated: 2009/12/29 - 534 words

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  • My Love

    (#) VendettaEmma 2009-12-20 06:54:53 PM

    You have something here. Don't let typos, or grammatic errors get in the way of your success. You should also try spacing things up a bit, maybe even make this lenghtier.
    I would love to read more!
    -Emma

    Author's response

    thanks! =]
    ill try to think about you tips when i write the next chapter.
    xoxo-Mikayla
  • My Love

    (#) hey_nena 2009-12-20 08:17:40 PM

    I agree with the above reviewer.

    Also, one thing that helps me is reading what I write out loud. That usually helps me catch typos, etc.

    I will definitely read another chapter.

    Author's response

    thank you for your tips.=]
    im glad to know you would read chapter two.
    it means a lot to me
    XOXO-Mikayla

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