(#) VendettaEmma 2009-12-20You have something here. Don't let typos, or grammatic errors get in the way of your success. You should also try spacing things up a bit, maybe even make this lenghtier.
I would love to read more!
Author's responsethanks! =]
ill try to think about you tips when i write the next chapter.
- I agree with the above reviewer.
Also, one thing that helps me is reading what I write out loud. That usually helps me catch typos, etc.
I will definitely read another chapter.
Author's responsethank you for your tips.=]
im glad to know you would read chapter two.
it means a lot to me
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