- Dun dun dun!
Really good. The spelling was fine. And I noticed you did space out the paragraphs.
I'm digging the story. There's a lot of questions going on in my head already: why is gerard being a jerk? where is her friend? did she stab her? where is her family, is no one going to check on her at the hospital?
Keep going! =]
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