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Blackout
2 ReviewsSadie has been stabbed just as the show starts....
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My Love
(#) VendettaEmma 2009-12-21 09:11:19 AM
Even if I had just gotten stabbed, I wouldn't of cared because I'd have the smexxiest people around me!
A lot of improvement!!
More,please!!
emmaAuthor's response
Yay!
Im so glad you like it =D
Already updated =]
XOXO-Mikayla -
My Love
(#) hey_nena 2009-12-21 09:20:41 AM
Dun dun dun!
Really good. The spelling was fine. And I noticed you did space out the paragraphs.
I'm digging the story. There's a lot of questions going on in my head already: why is gerard being a jerk? where is her friend? did she stab her? where is her family, is no one going to check on her at the hospital?
Keep going! =]