- Hm... I'm not sure, but I think I actually liked the original 2nd person perspective better, or maybe I'm just inimical to change. ;)
Author's responsesome readers of the original said that 2nd person put them off, so am trying out 3rd person.
Personally I prefer the 2nd person (more intimate in this case, perhaps?), but to each his/her own ^_^
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