- It's very unusually, but i like it. And about pairing... Harry will be with 3 girls(Hermione, Luna... Who's third?), won't he? I'll be very glad if so.
Author's responsethanks for your opinion. yes hermione and luna are two of the three and the third will be revealed in the next chapter or the one after. heres a hint though, what girl character up to the fourth book is most likely to smell like tears and tap water, based on their current status, try thinking outside the box
- It's an interesting story so far and I find the premise new and different (it's also the closest I've seen anyone come to crossing Harry Potter with Karl Edward Wagner's "Kane", though yours doesn't have quite the menace and background of his Kane. I'm looking foward to seeing who the third witch is, I rather suspect she might be Slytherin for only in the witch's bathroom there, with the tap running, could a witch indulge in tears, anywhere else 'twould a sign of weakness that would be exploited by her Housemates.
My only criticism is that you badly need a beta, there are times the spelling and homonym problems are rather distracting.
Author's responseyour close on the bathroom bit. but still a little to inside the box with your thinking. and i don't think anyone ever found out what house she was in
- I would love to see more of this. As for the pairing my guess is H/Hr/L/MM but hey thats just me. And i am thinking outside the box since MM is Myrtle.
Author's responseoh your a clever one aren't you. anything in particular you'd like to see as a reward for being the first to correctly guess the last girl?
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