- Inuyasha goes from gentle to harsh with no real transition. We see Kagome's thoughts well enough, but perhaps you could give us more of what she sees in Inuyasha. Does she watch him become upset with her?
So what happened to "osuwari"? Last I heard that was pretty effective at restraining Inuyasha, even as a full demon. While we're at it, what happened to Tessaiga? Why is Inuyasha full-demon in the first place and why would full-demon Inuyasha want to do anything but fight?
So Inuyasha dies right after that? That doesn't make sense. Does she kill him?
- There are some parts in this that dont make much sense. I Concure with Ithilwen when i say that i dont understand what she sees in him, could you possibly elaborate on certain points. What is going through inuyasha's mind? why is he acting so horribly? It does have a different setting than alot of the ones ... it is a bit different and not so much in a bad way to see him do something horrible to kagome, but what was it exactly that triggered the reaction? why was it that she didnt state that she wasnt kikyo and that she was in fact kagome?
- another thing i didnt quite understand, did she kill Inu? and what about the line you wrote....
"She would play pretend with the form that grew inside her now as well. She would pretend that the man had loved her and died a heroic death."
does that mean that she was pregnant or ????
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