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The Wicked One

She looked so much like her that he just couldn't help himself. [DARK Inu/Kag]

Category: Inuyasha - Rating: R - Genres: Angst, Romance - Characters: Inuyasha, Kagome, Kikyo - Warnings: [R] [V] - Published: 2006/04/17 - Updated: 2006/04/18 - 2768 words - Complete

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• The Wicked One

  (#) Ithilwen 2006-04-18 07:59:25 AM

  Inuyasha goes from gentle to harsh with no real transition. We see Kagome's thoughts well enough, but perhaps you could give us more of what she sees in Inuyasha. Does she watch him become upset with her?
  
  So what happened to "osuwari"? Last I heard that was pretty effective at restraining Inuyasha, even as a full demon. While we're at it, what happened to Tessaiga? Why is Inuyasha full-demon in the first place and why would full-demon Inuyasha want to do anything but fight?
  
  So Inuyasha dies right after that? That doesn't make sense. Does she kill him?

• The Wicked One

  (#) InuKag 2006-04-21 12:29:26 AM

  There are some parts in this that dont make much sense. I Concure with Ithilwen when i say that i dont understand what she sees in him, could you possibly elaborate on certain points. What is going through inuyasha's mind? why is he acting so horribly? It does have a different setting than alot of the ones ... it is a bit different and not so much in a bad way to see him do something horrible to kagome, but what was it exactly that triggered the reaction? why was it that she didnt state that she wasnt kikyo and that she was in fact kagome?

• The Wicked One

  (#) InuKag 2006-04-21 12:31:32 AM

  another thing i didnt quite understand, did she kill Inu? and what about the line you wrote....
  
  "She would play pretend with the form that grew inside her now as well. She would pretend that the man had loved her and died a heroic death."
  
  does that mean that she was pregnant or ????

• The Wicked One

  (#) Daniella 2006-07-05 11:49:29 AM

  tragic because first of all Inuyasha would never hurt her and RAPE! When they could have had ht tempestuous sex? Sad and moving, you are like Stephan King, I am overcome with your genius and yet secretly appalled.I always feel weirded out by hus writings, urs felt the same way.

• The Wicked One

  (#) kagome 2006-09-14 07:45:00 AM

  it was great story but next time dont have most of the groupe die and inuyasha think kagome is kikoy ok cause that will never happen i now i have seen episodes that no one elsy has and he never thinks that

• The Wicked One

  (#) k.a.a-inu 2007-03-06 04:17:24 PM

  hated it!why did u have to make him rape her? but i did like the ingenius and creative writing.

• The Wicked One

  (#) k.a.a-inu 2007-03-11 12:05:02 PM

  u didnt have to get all pissed off at me i was just tryin to help u w/your writing.

  Author's response

  What are you talking about? I didn't even respond to your earlier review so I couldn't have been "pissed off" at you.

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