Mikey battles with himself in a violent manner
(#) MyFamousLastWords 2010-03-07 01:37:49 PMI almost felt the need not to review this, just because it was so good. I loved the ending especially, the whole "you were me" thing, I really adore this. Maybe I love this so much because I can realte to it, actually with alot of your stuff I can...anyway, I think this maybe also slightly personal to you? I don't know, and I shouldn't be going there, just an assumption.
I'm favouriting this, definitely.
Author's responseI love hearing comments like this. I can't say this enough, but I'm really glad that someone can relate to my writing. It means to much because all of my writing is very personal to me, this piece included. So please, don't worry about "going there" because by posting my writing I'm choosing to let people see who I really am.
Anyways, that was just a long way to say thank you for rewiewing my writing. I'm glad that you decided to share your thoughts with me.
(#) BandiitMarie 2010-03-11 12:44:19 PMI really enjoyed this, because we all battle with ourselves inside, I like how you turned the internal battle into an external one, good job.
Author's responseI'm glad you noticed the internal battle in this. I wasn't sure if people would pick up on that.
Thanks so much for the review :D