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Neversaid

The battle against Naraku is finally over, but what will Kagome do when she finds that living in her own born time is practically unbearable? When Inuyasha is just as miserable will they find thei...

Category: Inuyasha - Rating: PG-13 - Genres: Angst, Drama, Romance - Characters: Inuyasha, Kagome - Published: 2006/04/20 - Updated: 2006/04/20 - 5882 words - Complete

Reviews

• Neversaid

  (#) Sarah 2006-04-20 09:32:38 PM

  I appreciate this story. It is really good. The grammar and such wasnt THAT bad.. there were a few, but all in all it wasnt unbearable to read. I enjoyed it. I think I am going to join this site just so i can rate you! NICELY DONE! I feel a bit inspired to try my hand at this.

• Neversaid

  (#) JackRabbit'sBabe 2006-04-20 09:35:53 PM

  Wow, Again, I feel inspired.. this is very cute, thank you for not making it so that they never see each other again, I HATE those. they always suck. Its kinda cute how he is towards her, a bit out of character but... alot of these stories about inuyasha and kagome are out of character. It still makes sense though because the vibe is there in Rumiko Takahashi's actual storylines.

• Neversaid

  (#) Neptune 2006-05-04 11:14:10 AM

  Not bad at all. You put effort into it, and it shows. It was cute. The characters might be just a little bit OOC, but not too badly (InuYasha struck me as just a tad off, but it's hard to get him right without falling into lots of angst or fighting), and you might not want to use the Japanese words in an English fic. They're disorienting, and not everyone knows what they mean. But you definitely have potential. ^^

  Author's response

  There is a sense of out of character but... if you pay close attention when reading the manga or watching the anime, you can see the tender side of him towards her, so it isnt tooooo far off. thanks so much Positive feedback is glorious haha.
  
  Plus, I enjoy putting in the slight mix of words because it brings the readers to the attention that this isn't being spoken in english without actually having to write the ENTIRE thing in japanese. ^_^ plus its a fun little thing to pick up

• Neversaid

  (#) BacktrackFwd 2006-05-23 04:01:27 PM

  This is beautiful... Kind of made me cry a little at how sweet it was... I love when people write stories that have endings like that... nice descriptions
  
  Kassie~

• Neversaid

  (#) crsytal 2006-06-16 12:33:41 PM

  i really like that storie that is what i think should happen in the show INUYASHA
  AND
  KAGOME
  FOREVER AND EVER

• Neversaid

  (#) crazy_reviewer 2006-09-04 12:43:03 AM

  you made me cry... that was so good! the crickets loved it to but the poor things just fell asleep (for more information on the crickets please look up the author crazy_reviewer sorry people I have been having trouble logging in) I am a HUGE Inuyasha+Kagome person so this story was AWESOME for me!

• Neversaid

  (#) Megan Dougherty 2006-10-19 07:32:27 PM

  Hi I onley revew to the best of stories and I definitly say that you qualafy. I loved the story keep writing

• Neversaid

  (#) inuyashalover2011 2006-11-15 01:52:44 PM

  great story

• Neversaid

  (#) Confusedchick 2007-02-03 11:58:27 AM

  aw that was beautiful! and who cares about grammar! as long as it had a good theme! (which it did)keep it up!
  DUCES!

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