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Fatal Facination
(#) AlexisSCREAM 2010-03-26
wow. I lvoed it. He's sooo messed up LOL
Bury Me In Black moment there, with the 'pretty insides' (i probably only realisid that because i was listenign to Bury Me In Black as i read it! LOL)
update soon
xoxoAuthor's response
I was writing and then laughed when I made that reference accidentally! haha, but yea Im glad you caught it! hahaFatal Facination
(#) Fantasy_Fairy 2010-03-26
Wow, Gerard is pretty paranoid! That was really insightful.
I really didn't think that this as all a game plan for Alyn - this whole breaking down business - but maybe it is her way of trying to manipulate Gerard or something.Author's response
Yea That is just his paranoid head, he isn't even really sure shes playing a game, but he needs all the control he can get, so he doeskin want to feel like anyone is over him. Yea he is paranoid i wanted to make sure that that was shown haha I guess I did! hahaFatal Facination
(#) mysilentromance 2010-03-28
I love how you had this in Gerard's POV. It was interesting to see how a serial killer thinks. (Even if he is a fictional killer.) It was neat to read because you learn alot about people through their thoughts. And it's always nice to learn more about Gerard in this.Author's response
Yea i like writing in G's pov, it helps me, help you guys see into his head. Which saves me a bunch of questions to answer lol. I plan on writing a couple more like "mental diary" entries, of his thoughts, so I hope you guys find it good to read :)Fatal Facination
(#) JusAnothrFaceNThCrwd 2010-03-28
Very interesting... I am liking this story a lot. It's super twisted, but def different from the normal stuff on here. I like it.Author's response
I appreciate you saying that lol. I like that it is different, because there is so much monotony,in fan fiction. thanks for the review. :DFatal Facination
(#) GiveEmHellKid 2010-04-04
I love it,its twisted,but its deep too. PLEASE UPDATE!
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