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Pretend To Be
(#) Pinky 2010-05-12
I don't get why you got a bad rating :(
It isn't a bad story, you give a lot of info at once and it's a bit tedious to read but other than that you're not bad :)
I like the description you used with his clothing and walls, quite nice.
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