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Chapter One
1 reviewChapter One: The Great Road Trip, Version Three. or - How did we get here from there? Ariel sets off on another unplanned road trip with her two best friends, determined to be the rock for Leeni.
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Far From Over
(#) ilex 2010-05-16
Oh boy, oh boy, ROAD TRIP!!!!!!
One of my favorite activities, too!
( Well, duh, that's how you learned, wasn't it? )
I know you're my daughter and all, but I WILL be your grammar/spelling/puncutaion nazi for this little foray into fanficdom.
SO far, okay, except you should always spell out okay, not use ok, but if you're consistant with ok then I'll ignore . . . besides, with 6 or 7 chapters posted already, it would be a royal pain to go back and change, so forget I mentioned it . . HE!HE!HE!
Good set-up chapter, and I have the feeling, as you wind your way south, we'll get more "background" info as you sit in the back seat and muse . . . okay, off to see if I'm right.
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