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Chapter One

by suzinixx 1 Reviews

Chapter One: The Great Road Trip, Version Three. or - How did we get here from there? Ariel sets off on another unplanned road trip with her two best friends, determined to be the rock for Leeni.

Category: Romance - Rating: PG-13 - Genres: Humor,Romance - Characters:  - Published: 2010/05/15 - Updated: 2010/05/15 - 1446 words

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  • Far From Over

    (#) ilex 2010-05-16 06:01:32 AM

    Oh boy, oh boy, ROAD TRIP!!!!!!
    One of my favorite activities, too!
    ( Well, duh, that's how you learned, wasn't it? )
    I know you're my daughter and all, but I WILL be your grammar/spelling/puncutaion nazi for this little foray into fanficdom.
    SO far, okay, except you should always spell out okay, not use ok, but if you're consistant with ok then I'll ignore . . . besides, with 6 or 7 chapters posted already, it would be a royal pain to go back and change, so forget I mentioned it . . HE!HE!HE!
    Good set-up chapter, and I have the feeling, as you wind your way south, we'll get more "background" info as you sit in the back seat and muse . . . okay, off to see if I'm right.

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