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show him who is his boss in bed!
- Kinky and nice. :) On the downside: a bit more editing on some of the text needed... there were quite a few missing apostrophes. Also, for some reason, the sixth stanza reads like it missed a beat or something... just a personal feeling.
Author's responsehahaha, i pasted it from my myspace... i usually dont care to use a lot of things like capitolization and apostrophes online... i should, but i dont. No its not missing a beat or something... its supposed to do that and be that way... THANKS! hah hey, if you still have myspace READD me.