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Tease

show him who is his boss in bed!

Category: Poetry - Rating: G - Genres: Angst, Fantasy, Romance - Characters:  - Warnings: [X] - Published: 2006/04/23 - Updated: 2006/04/24 - 199 words - Complete

Reviews

• Tease

  (#) MarkPoa 2006-04-30 06:02:37 AM

  Kinky and nice. :) On the downside: a bit more editing on some of the text needed... there were quite a few missing apostrophes. Also, for some reason, the sixth stanza reads like it missed a beat or something... just a personal feeling.

  Author's response

  hahaha, i pasted it from my myspace... i usually dont care to use a lot of things like capitolization and apostrophes online... i should, but i dont. No its not missing a beat or something... its supposed to do that and be that way... THANKS! hah hey, if you still have myspace READD me.
  

• Tease

  (#) Haruno sakura 2006-05-07 04:12:22 PM

  nice

• Tease

  (#) Han 2006-05-31 12:14:26 AM

  O_o
  Kinky
  Hot
  "Loves it"
  But yea, editing, bla bla bla....
  
  People are anal.
  
  Kinky

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