Claire is starting to fit in with the others but she worries about how Anna will react.
(#) AshleyBaby 2010-05-25 09:10:15 PM....hmmm
this story needs to progress faster.
Hurry and finish!
Author's responseOh good Lord. Stop reading now if you are want a quick finish. I have spent so much time and effort making this story a very involved work that I can be proud of. Sorry if that's not what you are looking for.
(#) FamousLastWords09 2010-05-26 07:13:21 AMHaha your response to the first review is funny 'Oh good Lord. Stop reading now if you are want a quick finish' lol I think I'm in a giggly mood.
Haha wouldn't it be funny if Anna had diabetes which is why she needs the shots (ok it wouldn't be medically funny) but it would be story funny cause it wouldn't really fit.
As always I thoroughly enjoyed that and I'm looking forward to the next installment.
Author's responseOkay stop laughing at me! I really didn't mean to sound evil on that response. I guess when I looked at it I just went "oh holy crap" there is so much to this story to be revealed that I just felt bad if someone thought there would be a quick ending. Hell look at what I've written. My first story was a epic that went on for almost 2 1/2 years LOL Not that this one will but the story really does get very involved. I do want to thank everyone for the reviews though. And by the way Missy when are you gonna update????
(#) x_Charlie_x 2010-05-26 08:37:27 AMAh wow, I really don't know what to say except that I love this fic!
I like that we're getting to see more of Claire and that she's getting her own little subplot thing going on.
Oo, I have a feeling we wont find out what those shots are for for a long time lol but I'm guessing it's something to keep her in control/ keep her alive?
If it hadnt just finished I would recommend you going to write for Lost lol, you're stories are pretty epic! Although you do tend to answer all the questions you raise =/ lol
Ok, this was meant to be quick =/ I can't wait for more!! xx
Author's responseThanks for the review. You know I never watched "Lost" but I heard it was good. I do like to have lots of twist and turns!
(#) Tomgirl567 2010-05-26 12:06:24 PMI love Claire and Bob together they seem so cute :D
I wonder what is up with Anna also what will happen when Gee does find out about this thing Anna is hiding. And just saying I do love how long your storys are it makes the story last longer and more exciting.
(#) lacerationgravityxxx 2010-05-26 02:09:39 PMgreat chapter!
right, she's dead. so this injection keeps her alive? or is it something she needs to have because she is dead, as in a Vampire??
Claire and her are different. ooh there is so much going on here behind the scenes isn't there?!
i don't want to guess actually. but i am loving it! and i want a long, well thought out story! blimey that is what i expect from you! haha!
i'm trusting Anna more in this chapter.
thank you Missus, and roll on Sunday!
(#) lunchboxhero 2010-05-27 08:46:22 PMHey Ashley. totally agree. Some of the chapters feel slow. You've every right to say that. It is a good story tho, interesting to see where it's going to go. I'm very interested in this Jacob character.
I have my theories but I always feel like an idiot if they're wrong so I'll keep em to myself for now.
- OMG IS SHE FUCKIN DEAD OR WHAT? Dear God, you are so good at this, girl! and about those who say your chapters are slow, they don't get a hint, lol. some chapters need to be that way; you need to enjoy reading it, now only discovering what happens at the end. the story itself is way more important than the ending, i think. mmmmm the ghost of you @ aol sessions, when Gerard goes OH, OH , OH. That's good.
hahahah i loved the part when G texts like "bob says hello to claire. LOL" i seriously laughed aloud. i swear. i dunno, i guess the LOL was like out of place since everything seems so "formal" between them. you know what i mean, not formal, but like.. poetic? they're both pretty poetic :P
LOVING THISSSSSSSSSSSSSSS SORRY I RAMBLE SO MUCH.
Hey I'd like to see some response :P