(#) XxPerfectTomorrowxX 2011-10-10It's interesting and well written but I don't understand how the fire is so hard to put out... or why Angel had to run in to town to get someone to put it out for him. Or why she couldn't take the dress off or something? I wouldn't stay in a burning dress.
Other than minor confusion on my part it was great!
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