in which Harry nears the end of adolescence and starts becoming… something else. Harry leaves the castle for something of an adventure while attempting to consciously avoid foolish things and fa...
(#) whatareyouevensaying 2010-08-20 03:57:42 PMGreat update! Unfortunately, I spent much of the first half imagining what pouring half a saltshaker into my mouth would taste like, but I expect that's my own fault.
I can't help but wish there was one more scene at the end, but it was a pretty good place to stop.
Looking forward to more.
- Heh, an excellent stopping place with all sorts of trouble obviously waiting in the wings for Draco. I thought the first bit was excellent and I rather enjoyed his stupid act (I rather imagine it was quite amusing to listen to the "talking heads" try and explain that he couldn't do what it was quite evident that he'd just done). Draco obviously has an overly inflated opinion of himself, I rather expect that Harry's response at the end of this chapter is about to defate that opinion, and quite possibly Draco.
Definitely a fun story to read, especially if one enjoys the original source of the inspiration.
- An update! Yeah! I love what you have Fleur doing to Voldemort! And I can hardly wait to see what you have Harry do to save the non-fanatically pure-bloods, half-bloods, and muggle-borns while still defeating the bigots!
Are you going to have Harry interact with Sirius and Remus? And is Tonks going to make another appearance?
- I loved the text on his t-shirt :-D
Ew... What Voldy is doing to try and break Fleur's mind is kind of... Ew! (and sick!) But I'm happy for Fleur that her magic healed her!
And I think that, should Fleur continue her little act with the Death-Eaters, there may soon be a lot less of them! (Oh... I wrote that immediately after the fact, and didn't see just lines after that, that Fleur already knew that... Well... It may be that I think like you ;-p)
Ooh! I can only imagine what the scene will be, when the lights will be on again! I have the feeling that the reactions will be fun!
And I'll have to re-read this story, because I realised that I forgot some details... Bah! At least, it IS a good story and I have each time I read it!
I hope to read more soon!