Long have I believed a potion resulted in the Canon pairings, but I never knew who did what. Then, someone suggested a person I never suspected and this is how I came to terms with it.
(#) Jden 2010-09-08
Not real exciting but a different twist at least. Structure not bad.
good story, good pairing.
(#) Vanir 2010-09-15
Sweet and clearly catering to Hermione's special brand of daft cleverness. I think it could do with some more detail, but then i always do. Nice job.
Different. And a cool new look at the canon pairings. It never made sense to me either.
It was excellent until it came to the "soul mates" and "Twue luv" lol
soul mates and true love are besides the point. The only reason they're mentioned is to highlight the fact that Hermione was over-thinking and hyper-rationalizing everything to the degree that she has gone against the natural order of things. Naturally, Hermione and Harry would end up together in any story I write.
A frighteningly plausible reason for the canon pairings that just seemed to come from no where.
I made this account to tell you that this is superb writing and a highly plausible story. I, myself, love canon pairings, but I still found this to be beautiful and touching.
I teared up a bit.
Keep it up
Thank you. That means a lot to me.
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