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Unexpected

by Jelly_Belly 1 Reviews

Chase gave House a "Don't you touch this!" glare. House snorted. "As If!"

Category: House - Rating: PG-13 - Genres: Drama, Humor, Romance - Characters: Allison Cameron, Eric Foreman, Gregory House, James Wilson, Lisa Cuddy, Robert Chase - Warnings: [R] - Published: 2006/05/04 - Updated: 2006/05/05 - 262 words

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  • Unexpected

    (#) Ithilwen 2006-05-04 08:04:10 PM

    "Cuddy found him." had found him (And begs the question: Why not? Where had he been hiding?)

    "mothers left hand." mother's

    "'As if!' he said." Oh how refreshing. I'd been afraid that it would be another cliche' "Meet your baby" story. The punchline would come off better if you hyped up that the woman was really stunning or something, as if Chase could be so lucky as to have her for his unclaimed baggage.

    Ficwad seems to be eating your tabs. Either find a way to keep them in or add an extra carriage return.

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